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Ravaged Soul...
06.06.04 (12:14 pm)   [edit]

This is my first venture into poetry. I hope you guys like it.

Ravaged Soul

I live in a world of misery,
And caged by my own desires.
I’ve gone on ahead to my paradise
Of which I now despise.

All my goals have turned to ashes
And all the ashes into dust
But I’ll struggle on to find new dreams,
In this world of empty scenes

Till death devours me and I am cold
My life would be for myself alone.
I’ll join the anger and all the strife
This world will be my playground,
My pleasure, my delight…


Poetry from me!?!?! Pretty hard to believe huh. :D

Copyright ©2004 Edmundo Falgui Ω
 

posted by: NewLife (reply)
post date: 06.06.04 (12:18 pm)

wow..i love that!!..very feeling,and stuff,ud be a good writer,an angst one u kno!,i love it,i can relate sorta to


posted by: Boogerschnot2 (reply)
post date: 06.06.04 (12:49 pm)

Thanks. i was kinda down with everything happening in my life when i wrote this.



posted by: fancycat (reply)
post date: 06.07.04 (7:10 am)

yikes...lol cool.

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